a guy is destined to meet the girl for him and then he had amnesia the girl came and have him treated in an hospital. and then she taken him on her care and then on some other time the girl have to be back on japan cause she is an heiress of a big business empire. she asked her nurse friend to take care of her bethrothed so the nurse friend take care of him but she fall in love with him so when the girl surprisingly decided to visit the guy she caught her friend confessing her love to her bethrothed she is broken hearted. what should she do?????Do you think this is good story??!!?
she should talk calmly to her friend and if they have to be enemies kill them!!!! hahaha!!!
well if they are destined to meet, that must mean they will be the 2 main characters; which means they eventually fall in love no matter what. Maybe you can write that he wakes up and fall for the friend, and when the girl shows up, he kind of has the special feeling towards her, some kind of feeling that he can't explain. Towards the end of your story he only likes the friend as an little sister, but loves the girl. But make sure that in the begining they (him %26amp; friend) never went out, its just that he was falling for her, halfway a little before he tries to ask the friend out the girl comes into the story.
sorry if I confuse you. It might not be the kind of story everyone likes but there's alway someone. Its okay.Do you think this is good story??!!?
it sounds o/k. be sure to read the 4 parts of my story on my profile!
I think you shouldest let them be. Thou hast many fish in the sea me lady.Do you think this is good story??!!?
As soon as you said "amnesia," I stopped reading.
The only place it ever occurs is on soap operas.
sounds too obvious
cry her guts out and kill them both
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