I need a good way to describe the inside of a shopping mall. Any ideas?I'm writing a story and in it there's a girl that has amnesia. How do you describe the inside of a mall?
You have to describe it from her point of view. What was she looking for? Why was she there?
There are many situations to this.
You could say it like this:
"When she entered in the mall, there were so many people. It was so crowded and noisy. She kept walking into it until she approached to a bench and sat down. She was feeling tired. She looked at all those stores of any kind, all those people walking around her, mothers with children, teenagers, everyone seemed to have a life. She was sitting there and started to wonder how was their life, what were they doing after? She couldn't find any answer to her questions. She started to feel sad wishing she was one of those people, with a home and a family to remember. She started to look down at her white shoes, when she noticed that a pair of black shoes approached to her."
You don't have to describe the mall, because I don't think that matters. You should describe what she's feeling. I just gave you an example. Not much o a writer. :DI'm writing a story and in it there's a girl that has amnesia. How do you describe the inside of a mall?
Try thinking of what's inside like escalators, galleries/platforms/indoor balconies, large windows, window shops, stands, glossy/glazed floors, ATM's, food-courts, arcades...
Also think of the stores typically in there like Toy's R' Us, Build a Bear, Abercrombie and Fitch, Guess, etc. There are stores for video games, chocolates, ice cream, shoes, clothes and a whole bunch of things.
I hope this helps. Happy writing!I'm writing a story and in it there's a girl that has amnesia. How do you describe the inside of a mall?
it's big and smells like cold air.
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