I am currently writing a novel. It is about a teenage girl who has amnesia. She completly forgets who she was and has to rely on who everyone else says she was. Little does she know, while she was in the hospital, her soul or whatever was put into someone else's body (scientifically , somehow .. ) and she kind of has to figure that out. Does anyone have any ideas on how i could make it better? Any twists I could add? And facts or details? I really need help! Thanks so much!Do you like my novel idea? And ideas?
Sounds like a good idea! A twist you could add is that someone could be behind all this, and you wouldn't expect it. Make it suspenseful, and make it to where no one would see it coming. In the beginning you could make the person behind it as her best friend. Then she could betray her by somehow having a type of crazy religion to switch lives (or souls). And you could say she was always jealous of her, and switched her friends soul to be in her body instead. Then she could lay back and laugh evily at how her friend is acting stupid, while she rests with her soul and yet still has a bit of that crazy psychotic mind. Lol hope this helps and gives you ideas :D Good luck with your novel! If it becomes a best seller, I will for sure buy it, hehehe :)Do you like my novel idea? And ideas?
Here is my idea:
The doctor who does this is her father or mother, and new about a genetic condition that would kill her completely if they hadn't done the soul-swap thing. After this, she must decide whether she wants to reunite herself with her different halves, or die.
Answer mine?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;鈥?/a>Do you like my novel idea? And ideas?
I do not usually like these kind of stories, but I know A LOT OF PEOPLE WHO DO!
One twist I suggest is that she was the doctor and put herself into another body; she wanted that to happen because something horrible happened in the past.... that's just my idea.......
The girl eventually finds out about the transplant, gets outraged and viciously attacks the transplant recipient. The enraged girl then tears the heart out of the transplant recipient and eats the still-beating organ, thus restoring her being.
Friday, March 9, 2012
I am looking for a harlequin romance book.?
- The girl had amnesia and ended up engaged to the guy's brother. The main guy character was mostly away from home and the only time he met his brother's fiance [the woman he was with] was she was introduced to the family.
I don't remember the author name or when it was published. I really hope someone can help me out!I am looking for a harlequin romance book.?
there are so many harlequin books with very similar themes to each other - i think you will be very lucky to find anyone who remembers this exact book but your best bet is to go on their website and browse through the books or go into the forums there and see if anyone does know this book
http://www.eharlequin.com/?cmpid=PSYAOUT鈥?/a>
I don't remember the author name or when it was published. I really hope someone can help me out!I am looking for a harlequin romance book.?
there are so many harlequin books with very similar themes to each other - i think you will be very lucky to find anyone who remembers this exact book but your best bet is to go on their website and browse through the books or go into the forums there and see if anyone does know this book
http://www.eharlequin.com/?cmpid=PSYAOUT鈥?/a>
Can you tell me the title of this movie?
SO, i watched this film like 5 years ago. It's been a long time, i know...
THe film is lyk this, they're once a couple, who gets in an island with no other people. And, the two of them got amnesia. And, they totally forgot everything. So, they started a new life in that forest. And one day, the girl gots pregnant and give birth by her own.
Can anyone tell me what's the title of that movie is??
Thx a lot guys!!Can you tell me the title of this movie?
blue lagoon
maybe blue lagoon? it has the same basic plot but slightly different. they didn't get amnesia and they were left on the island together when they were young and grew up together. the movie im think of is called blue lagoon (or something close to that) and stars brooke sheidsCan you tell me the title of this movie?
yeah it sounds like the blue lagoon, which was in '85 or so, and the sequel, return to blue lagoon was in like '95 with mila jovovich.
Idk about the moovie but i think ur talking about one where mila ivovich played the girl?Can you tell me the title of this movie?
a dictionary you clearly need it
dunno
Robinson Crusoe.
kidding, sounds like a nice movie though.
i have no idea lol, but im guessing it COULD be something with adam %26amp; eve?
Maybe "the blue lagoon" with Brook Shields
Blue Lagoon with Brooke Shields
freaky
return to blue lagoon
blue lagoon
Children of Men ?
it's blue lagoon i think....
idk.
i belevie it is called drift wood
THe film is lyk this, they're once a couple, who gets in an island with no other people. And, the two of them got amnesia. And, they totally forgot everything. So, they started a new life in that forest. And one day, the girl gots pregnant and give birth by her own.
Can anyone tell me what's the title of that movie is??
Thx a lot guys!!Can you tell me the title of this movie?
blue lagoon
maybe blue lagoon? it has the same basic plot but slightly different. they didn't get amnesia and they were left on the island together when they were young and grew up together. the movie im think of is called blue lagoon (or something close to that) and stars brooke sheidsCan you tell me the title of this movie?
yeah it sounds like the blue lagoon, which was in '85 or so, and the sequel, return to blue lagoon was in like '95 with mila jovovich.
Idk about the moovie but i think ur talking about one where mila ivovich played the girl?Can you tell me the title of this movie?
a dictionary you clearly need it
dunno
Robinson Crusoe.
kidding, sounds like a nice movie though.
i have no idea lol, but im guessing it COULD be something with adam %26amp; eve?
Maybe "the blue lagoon" with Brook Shields
Blue Lagoon with Brooke Shields
freaky
return to blue lagoon
blue lagoon
Children of Men ?
it's blue lagoon i think....
idk.
i belevie it is called drift wood
Do you think this is good story??!!?
a guy is destined to meet the girl for him and then he had amnesia the girl came and have him treated in an hospital. and then she taken him on her care and then on some other time the girl have to be back on japan cause she is an heiress of a big business empire. she asked her nurse friend to take care of her bethrothed so the nurse friend take care of him but she fall in love with him so when the girl surprisingly decided to visit the guy she caught her friend confessing her love to her bethrothed she is broken hearted. what should she do?????Do you think this is good story??!!?
she should talk calmly to her friend and if they have to be enemies kill them!!!! hahaha!!!
well if they are destined to meet, that must mean they will be the 2 main characters; which means they eventually fall in love no matter what. Maybe you can write that he wakes up and fall for the friend, and when the girl shows up, he kind of has the special feeling towards her, some kind of feeling that he can't explain. Towards the end of your story he only likes the friend as an little sister, but loves the girl. But make sure that in the begining they (him %26amp; friend) never went out, its just that he was falling for her, halfway a little before he tries to ask the friend out the girl comes into the story.
sorry if I confuse you. It might not be the kind of story everyone likes but there's alway someone. Its okay.Do you think this is good story??!!?
it sounds o/k. be sure to read the 4 parts of my story on my profile!
I think you shouldest let them be. Thou hast many fish in the sea me lady.Do you think this is good story??!!?
As soon as you said "amnesia," I stopped reading.
The only place it ever occurs is on soap operas.
sounds too obvious
cry her guts out and kill them both
"ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz" Oh, I'm sorry, did you say something??
she should talk calmly to her friend and if they have to be enemies kill them!!!! hahaha!!!
well if they are destined to meet, that must mean they will be the 2 main characters; which means they eventually fall in love no matter what. Maybe you can write that he wakes up and fall for the friend, and when the girl shows up, he kind of has the special feeling towards her, some kind of feeling that he can't explain. Towards the end of your story he only likes the friend as an little sister, but loves the girl. But make sure that in the begining they (him %26amp; friend) never went out, its just that he was falling for her, halfway a little before he tries to ask the friend out the girl comes into the story.
sorry if I confuse you. It might not be the kind of story everyone likes but there's alway someone. Its okay.Do you think this is good story??!!?
it sounds o/k. be sure to read the 4 parts of my story on my profile!
I think you shouldest let them be. Thou hast many fish in the sea me lady.Do you think this is good story??!!?
As soon as you said "amnesia," I stopped reading.
The only place it ever occurs is on soap operas.
sounds too obvious
cry her guts out and kill them both
"ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz" Oh, I'm sorry, did you say something??
Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
I choose the name for one of my main female characters. I know she is commonly called Rozzie, but to of my other characters only call her Roswell or Miss Dereks. Roswell actually named herself after being in a car accident and waking up with amnesia in Roswell, New Mexico. Should I keep it or change it to a more girlish name.Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
An author should keep in mind the difference between creativity and being kre8tiv.
Be as cute/original/creative as you like but remember that you can lose your audience if you go too far.
It's difficult to remain interested in a character if the name is blatantly outlandish.
The readers tend to focus on the name instead of the story.
That said, I think you've found a good hook for your character.
In real life, I would be dismissive of anyone named for a geopolitical location.
For the sake of a story line and this character, I find it intriguing without being ridiculous.
As long as you explain the name (once and very briefly!), I think readers would accept the name quite well.
It's not completely off the wall, has a reasonable explanation, and sounds interesting.
And, with the nn Rozzie, it is quite acceptable for a female character.
Yes, it could be masculine but I think it suits a female character better.
Don't refer to it in full, just get her to refer to herself as 'Rozzie' or Roz', which is far more common - shortened form of Rosalyn, etc. Only let slip the Roswell bit as an afterthought, as though she's embarrassed of it.Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
I really like the meaning behind the name. I personally think of a boy when I hear the name (reminds me of "Maxwell"), however, it seems to hold a subtle meaning to the story.
Keep it! :)
Since it's for a story, you can keep the name. I guess Rosewell sounds more feminine than Roswell though.Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
To me, it sounds like it could be either, but leaning slightly more to masculine.
It sounds more like a boy's name, but I like it. It's different.
in my opinion, i think roswell sounds more like a boys name--but its up to you.
boy name
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An author should keep in mind the difference between creativity and being kre8tiv.
Be as cute/original/creative as you like but remember that you can lose your audience if you go too far.
It's difficult to remain interested in a character if the name is blatantly outlandish.
The readers tend to focus on the name instead of the story.
That said, I think you've found a good hook for your character.
In real life, I would be dismissive of anyone named for a geopolitical location.
For the sake of a story line and this character, I find it intriguing without being ridiculous.
As long as you explain the name (once and very briefly!), I think readers would accept the name quite well.
It's not completely off the wall, has a reasonable explanation, and sounds interesting.
And, with the nn Rozzie, it is quite acceptable for a female character.
Yes, it could be masculine but I think it suits a female character better.
Don't refer to it in full, just get her to refer to herself as 'Rozzie' or Roz', which is far more common - shortened form of Rosalyn, etc. Only let slip the Roswell bit as an afterthought, as though she's embarrassed of it.Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
I really like the meaning behind the name. I personally think of a boy when I hear the name (reminds me of "Maxwell"), however, it seems to hold a subtle meaning to the story.
Keep it! :)
Since it's for a story, you can keep the name. I guess Rosewell sounds more feminine than Roswell though.Does Roswell sound like a girls name or a boys name?
To me, it sounds like it could be either, but leaning slightly more to masculine.
It sounds more like a boy's name, but I like it. It's different.
in my opinion, i think roswell sounds more like a boys name--but its up to you.
boy name
change it
What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
Okay so the main character (girl)) gets kidnapped by a mentally unstable man. She's mentally traumatized by what she expierienced like he beat her and starved and sometimes cut her and stuff. Well when he was beating her she gets hit in the head really hard by him and she gets amnesia. The girl doesnt remember anything about herself or about where she is but she knows she has to get away from the psychopath keeping her hostage and she manages to escape. Once she escapes she realizes she's all alone with no home, no place to sleep, and no idea who she is. While trying to find a place to stay the night she runs into Baine. When Baine finds her in this helpless state of mind he decides to help her. He takes her to a dr. Who tells them she has amnesia. Bane try's to help her remember who she is. And they end up falling in love with eachother. The girl has flashbacks sometimes of her past when she sees things familiar.
How do you think it should end? Should the kidnapper find her again? Should I make the beginning the part where she gets amnesia and doesnt remember anything and then reveal her past of getting kidnapped later in her flashbacks or something? So that the part of who she is is a mystery.
And also what are some unique but normal names for the main character? And A different name for Baine wud be good to.What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
I think it's a brilliant plot. Don't change anything. It would be nice if you could run the two stories parellelly: One starts with the girl (no memory) knowing she has to escape this guy, and the starts with the girl at home or what ever, all the way upto where she gets kidnapped. Chapters can alternate, and the final chapter can be the conclusion of both lines- and the story's gone full circle.
Baine is good as it is, because it sounds like 'bane' which is something you should avoid, right? It would be really ironic if Baine is the one who helps her, as opposed to being typical of his name and being her downfall or something.
The flashbacks would be a cool way of joining up the two parallel story lines so that the reader can realize (not at once though) this is the same girl in both stories. You could have a flashback in story A, which actually happens in story B later, so readers can connect the two.
I'm afraid I'm no good with names, but a very common name for the girl (not revealed in the main storyline- kidnapped thing- because she can't remember) would be great, because you don't really expect anything to happen to the girl- next- door-, do you?
Hope that helps!What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
Kidnapper Bruiser and Baine should be revealed as lovers complicit in the crime.
The story should be told "in media res."What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
Thats actually REALLY good!!.. i dislike books but this is something id take time to read.. i honestly dont know how it cud end.. i say if you created such a great plotline i dont see why you can do an even better ending!
Are you sure that's night and not simply a strange case of daytime?
How do you think it should end? Should the kidnapper find her again? Should I make the beginning the part where she gets amnesia and doesnt remember anything and then reveal her past of getting kidnapped later in her flashbacks or something? So that the part of who she is is a mystery.
And also what are some unique but normal names for the main character? And A different name for Baine wud be good to.What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
I think it's a brilliant plot. Don't change anything. It would be nice if you could run the two stories parellelly: One starts with the girl (no memory) knowing she has to escape this guy, and the starts with the girl at home or what ever, all the way upto where she gets kidnapped. Chapters can alternate, and the final chapter can be the conclusion of both lines- and the story's gone full circle.
Baine is good as it is, because it sounds like 'bane' which is something you should avoid, right? It would be really ironic if Baine is the one who helps her, as opposed to being typical of his name and being her downfall or something.
The flashbacks would be a cool way of joining up the two parallel story lines so that the reader can realize (not at once though) this is the same girl in both stories. You could have a flashback in story A, which actually happens in story B later, so readers can connect the two.
I'm afraid I'm no good with names, but a very common name for the girl (not revealed in the main storyline- kidnapped thing- because she can't remember) would be great, because you don't really expect anything to happen to the girl- next- door-, do you?
Hope that helps!What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
Kidnapper Bruiser and Baine should be revealed as lovers complicit in the crime.
The story should be told "in media res."What do you think of my story idea? Is it bad?
Thats actually REALLY good!!.. i dislike books but this is something id take time to read.. i honestly dont know how it cud end.. i say if you created such a great plotline i dont see why you can do an even better ending!
Are you sure that's night and not simply a strange case of daytime?
What do you call this condition?
There's this girl I know and she bumped her head real hard and she can recall some things but not others. I know it's some sort of amnesia but I'm not an expert, and I cant trust looking it up cos it might be inaccurate. Are there different kinds of amnesia?What do you call this condition?
Sounds like a concussion which can cause some memory problems and should resolve. Amnesia can be antegrade (cannot remember what is going on at the present time), or retrograde (cannot remember past events). Amnesia can be due to a concussion. She should see a doctor to assess the extent of the injury.What do you call this condition?
It sounds like selective amnesia, which can be caused by a concussion. You should tell her to go to the doctor.
Sounds like a concussion which can cause some memory problems and should resolve. Amnesia can be antegrade (cannot remember what is going on at the present time), or retrograde (cannot remember past events). Amnesia can be due to a concussion. She should see a doctor to assess the extent of the injury.What do you call this condition?
It sounds like selective amnesia, which can be caused by a concussion. You should tell her to go to the doctor.
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